Insomniac - Cover Option 1

For class we had to create a cover for our series with a gimmick. I chose to do an Iron on T-shirt. I came up with 3 sketches and couldn't decide between them so I chose to do all three instead of one.

In 3 weeks I'll be posting a picture of how it looks on the actual T-shirt itself!

As far as the image goes I'm not too happy with the finish. I had a lot of issues with the inking and had to white out half of the figure. The coloring is rushed and lacks a certain oomph I can't grasp. I prefer the pencil sketch.